Deliver Me[1]

Two days ago, I came down with a terribly severe yet brief case of either gastroenteritis or food poisoning. Whatever it was, it put me in a situation where I had to cry out to God to provide some serious healing. And in that crying out, I decided to record a song!

Here's my version of Deliver Me; as you can tell, it's super rough (I only spent ~1 hr recording this), so I was hoping that you guys could help me out with this and we could release this as a Makeshift song! Basically, the acoustic guitar track is absolutely terrible (recorded using the speakers of my MBP + the guitar is out of tune on the A string + off-timing for some parts), so maybe Ajuh, could you work on a killer guitar track? Also, I sang far away from the speakers, so the voice is super faint (Cliff, work your Mr. McDreamy voice?) I also might redo the electric solo track since it's a bit repetitive and timing (again). Anyways, if you guys are busy and whatnot, no worries, but I just thought we'd get this collaboration train chugging again.

If you guys want to actually work on this, I'll set up a subversion repository that we can use. It's basically something that keeps track of changes made by different people, so we can track the progress of the song as we individually make our changes, and revert back to older versions if we need to. SVN repos are mostly used by coders (duh) but I think it'll be super useful for us as a band if we ever decide to do more collaboration via the Internet.